i also took a crack at poetry

[starr]

I'm not much of a writer really and I'm not perfectly fluent in English so ignore my grammar if it's terrible. But uhh yeah.. enjoy I guess?

I'm a soldier of war

A man of many talents

and have never been one to be very gallant

But what I know is killing, chaos and blood shed

Someone who has had a gun point to so many innocent heads

Do I regret what I did?

No not a chance

I may just be a weapon but in a trance by the

government who told me,

"It's for your country."

But it's my own fault for never asking a question

And instead gave into aggression

For a country who fought against ours

Who fought against these silver stars

Who am I but a young country boy

Who is nothing but a little toy

For the man who says he fights for the "free world"

To ask the questions no one wants to hear

Instead of listening to my puppeteer

And dancing when they tell me to

And moving when they tell me to

And shooting when they tell me to

And killing when they tell me to



I'm a soldier of war

A man of many talents

I've seen the worst of the world

And have had my future hurled

Away from me, my thoughts

My mind

All had been taught

Not to feel pain,

Not to feel regret

And to eliminate the threat

Of a country who fought against ours

Who fought against these silver stars

For I am a soldier of war

A man of many talents

Who knows nothing but killing and chaos and blood shed

Who had pointed a gun at so many innocent heads

[ireland]

This is beautiful Starr~<3 I liked it, and I'm pretty sure all of your grammar was correctamundo! (; Keep it up, and I like how this poem connects with the site too xD Not sure if that was intended or not, BUT WAY TO GO. I liked your repetition and everything. Very nice, very nice.

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