starr
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Post by starr on Oct 15, 2010 21:55:28 GMT -5
I'm not much of a writer really and I'm not perfectly fluent in English so ignore my grammar if it's terrible. But uhh yeah.. enjoy I guess?
I'm a soldier of war
A man of many talents
and have never been one to be very gallant
But what I know is killing, chaos and blood shed
Someone who has had a gun point to so many innocent heads
Do I regret what I did?
No not a chance
I may just be a weapon but in a trance by the
government who told me,
"It's for your country."
But it's my own fault for never asking a question
And instead gave into aggression
For a country who fought against ours
Who fought against these silver stars
Who am I but a young country boy
Who is nothing but a little toy
For the man who says he fights for the "free world"
To ask the questions no one wants to hear
Instead of listening to my puppeteer
And dancing when they tell me to
And moving when they tell me to
And shooting when they tell me to
And killing when they tell me to
I'm a soldier of war
A man of many talents
I've seen the worst of the world
And have had my future hurled
Away from me, my thoughts
My mind
All had been taught
Not to feel pain,
Not to feel regret
And to eliminate the threat
Of a country who fought against ours
Who fought against these silver stars
For I am a soldier of war
A man of many talents
Who knows nothing but killing and chaos and blood shed
Who had pointed a gun at so many innocent heads
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Post by ireland on Oct 16, 2010 16:25:24 GMT -5
This is beautiful Starr~<3 I liked it, and I'm pretty sure all of your grammar was correctamundo! (; Keep it up, and I like how this poem connects with the site too xD Not sure if that was intended or not, BUT WAY TO GO. I liked your repetition and everything. Very nice, very nice.
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